WE ARE Poem

We had to write a WE ARE poem to show what community we are in, I chose Hornby High and I immediately knew what to write.  So this is my WE ARE poem, I hope you like it because it describes the values and teamwork of Hornby High.

Here it is:

I AM Poem

This is my I am poem, read from left to right otherwise you aren't reading it properly.  I have worked hard on this and I really hope you enjoy it, I put two lovely backgrounds in so it would look awesome and so it would show both of the different sides of me.  Here it is:

My Narrative Writing

This week Mr. Mitchell told us we had to pick a number from 50 selected story summaries. The link is here:
https://sites.google.com/a/hornby.school.nz/mt/7write

I picked 22, I had to write a made up story about a dangerous experience.  

This is my writing:

22 - A dangerous experience

I was on my way to school, and Mum was acting weirdly when she was driving.  Suddenly, she passed out! I had to steer the wheel, so I unbuckled my seatbelt and leaped into the front seat to help steer the wheel… I did it!  I managed to get mums foot of the pedal and I steered the wheel until it was safe. I got Mums phone and called 111 so she could get an ambulance…

“Hello, what’s your emergency?” The person on the other line said.“Hi, uhh yes I’ve almost been in a crash with my mum and she passed out, we are on waterloo road!  Near the school I go to, Hornby High School, I need an ambulance for my mum immediately!” I said as I panicked.  I waited and waited and… An ambulance came!!! I was never so happy to see an ambulance in my life! But… It just went right past us.  
Oh I know! I have to signal something so they know I’m here with my mum.  I take Mum out of the car onto the sidewalk so the ambulance can see Mum and I.  The ambulance sees us! I see the ambulance coming towards us…

I wake up and I’m in my bed with my mum telling me to get up and get ready for school…

The Goody Gum Drop Land vs The Creamy Vanilla Heaven

In Week 4 Mr. Mitchell (My Teacher) Bought Ice cream for us to write about, it was vanilla Ice Cream.  This Week Mr. Mitchell bought ice cream again for us to taste and write about.

This weeks Ice Cream was Goody gum drops.

I have put both my Finals on this blog post for you to read.

Here's the Goody Gum Drops:

The Ice cream looked so creamy and gooey like it was a slime monster that was edible and delicious!  It smells like a minty world mixed with a lolly land that I can live in forever.  

The ice cream is named goody gum drops for a reason, the lollies are so chewy

like bubblegum frozen like a Popsicle.  The gum drops look like skittles if they

were frozen in a minty ice cream heaven!  It tastes like a minty meltdown that has turned

into gooey goo that is devouring the gum drops like a lion devours its prey.  The ice cream

is so yum it’s like I can’t stop thinking about how mouthwatering and how palatable it is.  

It’s so tummy-twisting that I can’t help myself but eat more!  I think that you should buy

goody gum drops so you can try it for yourself.  Make sure to save me some Aha.

Now here's the Vanilla Writing:

The ice cream tasted like a creamy meltdown in my mouth, like a tasty luscious

mountain of snow!  The ice cream looked as silky as a scarf made of scales and wool.  

The ice cream smelled as minty as a snowman made of a pack of minty bubblegum!  

The ice cream felt like an icy piece of vanilla chocolate that was melted up into loads of mini

frosted treats!  It was really delightful to taste and it was a real treat to have!  I loved eating

the ice cream because it was like I was in the middle of a room made of delectable ice cream

and it was like I was in an all you can eat buffet! In conclusion, I would say buy this ice cream because this ice cream is completely and utterly amazing if you want to buy a treat for

yourself, it’s cheap and definitely worth the indescribable flavour!

Now, I want you to decide which one you think is better?

Comment down below which one you think is better.