The picture below is a character description that I have written about a character from the book Freak the Mighty. The character is Tony D., this character description is a work in progress so it might change later. The purpose of me showing all of you is so that I can get feedback. If anyone has any questions or any comments, I would like it if you comment down below because feedback is one thing that I need. Freak the mighty is written by Rodman Philbrick. The reason I am reading Freak the mighty is because in my class, I am in literacy group 2 and we get to read novels to make D.L.O's about those novels, last term I read Number the stars by Lois Lowry.
Hey Zayd I like your blog post about Freak The Mighty. I like how you have added the cool photo of Tony D,I like how much information you have added into your work. What you should add next into some more detail in your trait but after all of that its good. Keep up the good work Zayd
ReplyDeleteThank you Josef, I will be sure to update my work, thank you for the feedback.
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ReplyDeleteHi? I don't know why you said that. This isn't a logo. Do you have any feedback for me?
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