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Friday, September 9, 2016

I Was Sent Into Space.

W.A.L.T Write a narrative.

This is my presentation of my space chimp story, I did my planning and a first draft, doing those things helped me make this presentation.  Here it is, my presentation of the space chimp story.  I hope you like it.

4 comments:

  1. Great job Zayd on your I was sent into space story. I realy like that you did it in chapters and I like the amazing words that you used and the punctuation. Great job Zayd!

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  2. Great job Zayd I like how you got chapters that means we dont have to find the page we have read. But maybe you should make it not so compact but anyway good job.

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