I have written a narrative about a dog called Buster the Boxer. I have used descriptive words, speech marks, and punctuation. First I had to watch a video about Buster the Boxer, then I had to turn it into words, instead of vision. Here is the link of the video.
Buster the Boxer.
Now here is my story, I advise watching the video first.
On a cold, icy, frigid night, I was sitting in the most great room I could ever think of, getting lightheaded because of watching my owner’s little girl jumping on her bed like there was no tomorrow. She was probably hoping for a trampoline for christmas, she was so excited that I almost fainted. My owner told her to go to sleep because it was getting too late, she hopped down into bed and fell asleep straight away. I saw my owner’s husband setting up the trampoline for their daughter, he almost cut himself, but once he was done setting the trampoline up, he headed back inside.
I saw something, I saw a fox come out of a bush, it headed towards the trampoline, it’s companion followed it saying “I - I - I don’t think we should be here, we could be followed.”.
“It’s okay, dude, we won’t be followed, trust me, I am always right, even if we are - wait what is this rubber? It is so stretchy we can jump on it!”.
“Oh - Okay, dude, wait, this is so much fun! We should invite other animals to play with us on this hopping machine!”. They were having so much fun I felt resentful. “Woah, what are those two Foxes doing? I wanna join in on it!”. Said a Badger as it joined in on them.
“Me too!”. Said a Squirrel and a Hedgehog.
They looked like they were having so much fun, I felt sad because they were poking faces at me and the first fox said, “Haha, that dumb dog is missing out on our furlough.”.
I woke up and saw the girl racing downstairs like a race car in a race. Her dad opened the sliding door and she seemed shocked to have a trampoline for her first time, I raced her out there, I ran like a cheetah and I bet her to the trampoline before she could go on it. I jumped high in the air as I felt the wind swaying in my face as I saw the animals watching, the first Fox said “W-why does that dog get to have all the fun?”.
“Because I am their protector.”. I said. The little girl was shocked to see me jumping on the trampoline, she said, “Oh - My - Gosh - HOW IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE?”. I just kept on jumping and jumping, she joined me after a while, then she hugged me and said “I love you, Buster.”.
Fin.
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