The "Special" Present.

W.A.L.T: Write a narrative.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• The title is suitable for the text.

• The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
• The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
• The resolution explains how the problem was solved.

The “Special” Present!

On one fine afternoon I was playing call of duty modern warfare on my Xbox 360.  My mum came home and I saw something in her hands, it was a box!  I was thinking, “Oh boy! What has she got me this time?”  She dropped it on the table, the box caught my eye.  She opened the blinds, “Aah!”  I opened the box slowly, A puppy jumped out!  I’ve always wanted a puppy!  I can’t believe mum got me one!  I feel happy!  I pick the dog up and…  I can’t believe it, mum got me a deformed dog, it has half a left front leg!  I feel betrayed!  I fell rage!  I dropped the dog on the floor away from me like it’s my enemy!

The dog finds a ball and picks it up, the dog kicked the ball to me so I kicked it back, the ball landed in the box then the dog runs into the box!  The dog made me laugh a little, I smile at the dog but then it looks at me, so I make an angry face to make it look like I hate it.  The dog runs up to me with the ball in his mouth, then the dog dropped the ball so I picked up the ball and put it in my pocket, I was feeling happy!

I picked up my crutches and walked towards the door.  I said, “Mum we’re going outside!”.  As I walked outside I was thinking that it’s good to have someone like me to play with, because I have half a left leg as well!  So me and the dog went outside to play with the ball, so I named him Player.

THE END!!!